I say, had a man
But in truth,
He was never really mine
He tried to tell me several times,
But … he was just mine …
You know?
I loved a man once
And how I loved him so
I loved him soo much,
I sacrificed my friend
I knew he wanted her
So a blind-eye I turned
Well … after that,
We never could look each other in the eye,
My friend and I
Guilt became our new bedfellow
Hers, for ignoring that niggling voice
That voice which spoke of past tenderness
Betwixt him and I
Mine, for not protecting her
Protecting her from her impending folly.
I had a man once
Mine for a brief moment
I had to let him go
Cos he was never truly mine
I understand that now.
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I have a friend that needs to read this like seriously
mercy! this is good
thanks jare
PS: WHAT TOOK U SOOO LONG, I LOOK FORWARD TO UR STUFF
lolll - thank you! i've just started writing again and actually writing. You wouldn't believe this hit me 6.30am sunday morning as i was driving home from partying saturday and i had to pull over so i could write it down :-D
P-s - as for your friend - i really hope she's able to let go as no part of this is healthy.
hmm I've been reading this over and over for awhile.
I've not been able to comment because it makes me catch my breath.
It just does.
This is a great poem ... as usual!
By the way, you need to link it from your other blog. That's why I didn't realise you'd updated!
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very nice
so ur friend got him
hmmm, some friend she is!
the poem is lovely...I like it
nice blog
i'll be back
she is back....
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